tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post8841451257502285396..comments2023-10-31T07:48:03.919-04:00Comments on Vintage Vonnie : Eight Sentence Sunday -- Rain is a Love SongVonnie Davis ~ Romance Authorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07360480832587538895noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-2731804832654901222013-06-05T16:15:50.261-04:002013-06-05T16:15:50.261-04:00Wonderful emotional scene there.Wonderful emotional scene there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-55929995041546072282013-06-05T03:00:16.135-04:002013-06-05T03:00:16.135-04:00I like how they naturally come closer. I like how they naturally come closer. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-8716332065891310122013-06-04T18:10:05.164-04:002013-06-04T18:10:05.164-04:00This was a great snippet, the way you describe the...This was a great snippet, the way you describe the mother daughter bonding, then they to him---very touching. Excellent 8!<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders</a><br />HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-8444826751553187012013-06-02T19:36:07.658-04:002013-06-02T19:36:07.658-04:00For some reason this book reminds me of a black an...For some reason this book reminds me of a black and white movie on the Turner Classic Movie channel (smile).Angela Adamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06102308492358084929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-63594405402598070712013-06-02T18:11:53.820-04:002013-06-02T18:11:53.820-04:00Came here via twitter, I love that phrase - Rain i...Came here via twitter, I love that phrase - Rain is a Love Song. Beautiful. And your snippet is intriguing.sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-28097296765638047702013-06-02T16:52:51.970-04:002013-06-02T16:52:51.970-04:00I loved this scene, especially as the surprise of ...I loved this scene, especially as the surprise of being so suddenly trapped between them becomes a sense of sharing the intimacy of that moment and then protecting it. Really well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-89534043866159134022013-06-02T15:53:43.900-04:002013-06-02T15:53:43.900-04:00I love the 'noir' feel of the language in ...I love the 'noir' feel of the language in this snippet. Anonymoushttp://danitaminnis.danitaminnis.com/2013/06/02/danita-minnis-weekend-writing-warriors.aspxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-21292488738657263502013-06-02T14:41:28.801-04:002013-06-02T14:41:28.801-04:00This was a marvelous snippet, loved the way he all...This was a marvelous snippet, loved the way he allowed them to cling to him and how he was surprised at himself. Very effective!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-49552708052644428082013-06-02T13:41:55.664-04:002013-06-02T13:41:55.664-04:00I LOVED this so much, especially the imagery of hi...I LOVED this so much, especially the imagery of him being squashed between them and letting that emotion in.<br /><br /> In fact, each week I select my favorite entry to receive a Superb Snippet award, and yours is it! I'll be contacting you with the award graphic. Thanks for posting this!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-857180574575421857.post-79082235355975021992013-06-02T10:09:31.424-04:002013-06-02T10:09:31.424-04:00very nice makes me want to know morevery nice makes me want to know moresuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com