The Match Maker Series
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A coffee house in a town
of the author's choice.
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The heroine goes inside
and meets the owner, Freya.
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Freya sits down with the
heroine, listens to her story and sets her up with the hero.
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At the end of the story,
the heroine goes back to the coffee house and finds it is now a vacant lot.
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The coffee house must be
described as Freya’ Coffee Shop with a grey roof, yellow stone walls, red trim
windows and a red door with blue trim.
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The owner, Freya, must
be described as an older woman in her seventies, red hair and brown eyes. Freya’s
name means: the goddess of love, beauty and sensuality. She likes to wear:
clothes in the shades of love (reds, pinks), eye shadow, nail polish, and a
large sapphire ring on her right hand. Freya is very friendly and quirky.
My mind started churning. You know that
incredible “what-if…” feeling? Oh yeah! Something in those few lines of parameters called to me. I don’t know why. I don’t write fantasy or magical
stories. Although it is magical anything I write ever gets published, but we won't go there.
What kind of man would use the services of a matchmaker? A man who's lost hope, perhaps? Slowly Declan Fleming began to take shape. Not just any man, but a Renaissance man. A man who built things with his hands, who read a lot and worked with teenagers. A man of contradictions. A man with a violent past, an ex-SEAL, who also knew the language of flowers. The lady who would charm his soul? Well, she had to be a bit of a handful, someone completely unexpected. Still, I'd never written really "short" before. Did I have the skill set to quicky develop my characters and a strong GMC? Oh, I do love a challenge...
Hope Morningstar has the worst luck with
men. One boyfriend wrote her a “Dear
John” letter while serving overseas. Her latest romantic interest broke up with
her in a text. When a traffic detour puts her in an unfamiliar neighborhood,
she stops at Freya’s Coffee Shop where she gets more than directions. She gets
another chance at finding love.
Declan Fleming, scarred by a cheating
ex-wife, has given up searching for love. He’s taken the route of a few other
men and engaged the services of Freya, the matchmaker. Still, he’s been waiting
for a year and he’s just about given up hope. Then Freya sends him Hope.
When feelings of insecurity and trust
issues come into play, can finding love stand a chance? Can the magical
influence of this matchmaker create a happy ending? After all, finding that one
special love often involves a bit of special magic, does it not?
“A man’s kiss should taste like chocolate, dark flavor melting,
doing sensual things to you.” –Freya, the Matchmaker
EXCERPT:
Hope’s
stomach cramped, and she couldn’t seem to take one deep, complete breath. She
eyed the paper bag she kept in her purse. If she hyper-ventilated, she’d need
it. Oh, God. Oh, God. Oh, God, I am
freaking insane.
Once
he came, if he came, she’d give him ten minutes, and then she was out of here.
She didn’t care how good looking he was. Wait, she’d decided to go for content
of character, not looks. This change in priorities would take time. Old habits
were hard to break. Her gaze swept the area. With any luck he wouldn’t show.
“Don’t
turn around.” A deep voice behind her sent chills up her spine. “I’m Declan, the
man Freya sent. I know you’re scared, but don’t be. There’s no need.”
Why
couldn’t she look at him? Was he butt-ugly? Short and fat? What? Remember, I’m not going to concentrate on
his looks. I’m making wiser choices this time. I’m looking at the man on the inside,
not the hunk on the outside. She exhaled a long, slow breath. “Okay.”
“Close
your eyes for just a second.”
Oh,
this was just too weird. Even so, she closed them. Something satiny soft rubbed
over her cheek and she jerked. Roses. She smelled roses. Velvety softness
caressed her chin.
“Rose
petals are very soft, aren’t they?”
“Yes.”
They were also very sensual when rubbed over her face. “I’m opening my eyes
now.” Enough playing games. Every person in the food court had to be watching them.
“As
you wish.” He held a small bouquet in front of her. “Purple roses are for love
at first sight. Purple irises are the flower of hope.”
There
were two purple roses and two irises snuggled in a bed of baby’s breath and
tied with a pink ribbon. What a charming gesture. Don’t weaken. Be strong. Don’t let him suck you in.
“And
the baby’s breath?” She’d yet to look at him, but took his sentimental offering
from his calloused hand. “What does that flower mean?”
“Sincerity.” He
stepped to her side, and her gaze lifted. “Hello, Hope. I’m Declan Fleming.”
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18 comments:
Congratulations on publishing another story! I like reading short stories and novellas, and you're right--they are challenging to write, but so fun and rewarding. In just a matter of hours or days, you have a complete story!
A Taste of Chocolate sounds sweet and delicious!
charmainetdavis@yahoo.com
Hi Charmaine. To construct a story properly, one still has certain elements of craft to adhere to. Elements that take this old gal longer than a few minutes or days to write. Nailing down Declan's conflict was a challenge. Thankfully I had an editor who encouraged me to dig deeper into his psyche. Her encouragement made for a richer story...and I'm not just talkin' about chocolate. ;-)
I'm so glad something caught your eye, Vonnie. Anything that causes your mind to create a new tale in your wonderful voice is a good thing as far as I'm concerned.
You're a braver woman than I. Short is scary, but alas, you've pulled it off. ;-)
Thanks for another wonderful read, my friend.
I love reading novellas. Have written one (and sold it!)but I have much to learn about their construction. Short is so much more difficult to write. Would love to win a copy of A Taste of Chocolate. :) Sounds fun!
jessyferguson (at) gmail (dot) com
Thanks, Mac. I'm thinking you could pull off writing a short story. Keep your focus tight, your prose concise. It might be a good exercise for you and enrich your longer pieces in the bargain.
Jessy, since you left me 3 spelling versions of your name, I'm chosing the one that sounds the sweetest to me, since "sweet" is our topic of the day.
Jessy...yikes...I'm at Bob Evans and the waitress brought our food and, in the flurry of things, I hit "publish your comment" before I'd finished commenting. I wanted to say thanks for stopping by and hope you'll return again soon.
This does sound magical, Vonnie. Sweet, sexy, and sigh-worthy. Congrats, you busy, talented woman, you!
Thanks, Melissa. I'm retired and my new life--my FUN life--revolves around writing. Thank goodness my husband is an author, too, and understands the way my characters jerk me around and command my attention. Today, for example, I'm scrambling across the rooftops of Paris with my h/h, chased by bad guys and ducking bullets. I'm a romance writer and I love my job.
Your story sounds magical and I LOVE the sensual detail. As a fellow SMP author, I'll be so interested in seeing how you incorporated the required elements.
l.carrollbradd@gmail.com
So glad you picked this series to write for !!! It truly is a magical story :)Congrats on A Taste of Chocolate coming to life !!
A delicious little tidbit to whet the appetite.
Hi Linda. Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to leave a comment. This story was fun to write once I got it started. I went through four or five versions of a beginning before one felt right. Ack!!
Thanks for your kind words, Krista! Love your name, by the way. When I was pregnant with my third child I allowed my son and daughter to name the yet unborn baby. My son chose Michael. And my daughter picked Krista. Now, here's the funny part. I had a boy and who does Mike marry? A very special lady by the name Krista. Is that wild, or what??? If I used that "truth" in a book, a reader would say it was contrived or forced.
Thanks Liberty. A little taste of sweetness...
The cover is so pretty. Sounds like a wonderful story.
sue B
katsrus(at)gmail(dot)com
Calvin drew names from his hat. My two winners for copies of A TASTE OF CHOCOLATE are Linda Carroll-Bradd and Charmaine T. Davis. Yay you!!! I'll be emailing soon. Thanks everyone for commenting on my post. Hugs to all.
Vonnie, this book cover makes me want to reach for a box of Godiva's. Best wishes with your new release.
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