One day I received an email from one of my yahoo loops about a post entitled "Love Darts and Escargot." Hunh? Seems Rolynn Anderson's tree was peppered with snails throwing quills as part of their mating ritual, or love darts as she called them. Whoa!
Love
Darts!
Just the mention conjured a visual in
my demented mind.
In a flash, the opening scene to BACK WHERE YOU BELONG was right there! I opened a document and started writing and chuckling and scheming. Don't you love it when that happens?
Here's the opening scene...
What the
hell?
Tyler Desmond
whirled away from the shot he was about to make at the pool table to grasp for
whatever caused the sudden, stinging pain at the back of his neck. When his
fingers closed around a dart, he yanked the offending object out, searching
through the crowd in the Lonesome Steer
Honky Tonk for the bastard who dared throw one at him.
His cousin Billy
Wayne leaned in close as if to examine the dart’s point of entry. “Damn, that’s
gotta hurt.”
Tyler’s eyes
narrowed on the culprit. The object of his wrath stood about eight feet away,
her face glowing red like embers in a branding fire and eyes mushrooming when
his gaze zeroed in on hers.
He handed his
cue stick to Billy Wayne and growled, “Not as much as one female’s about to. You
can be damn sure of that.”
Three women, her
friends no doubt, scurried back to their table, leaving her to face him alone.
He slowly sauntered toward her, gathering his words as he approached. He’d cut
many men to size with his acidic tongue. This woman would be no
different.
Nervous hands
clasped and unclasped and then fiddled with curly blonde hair. Then, as if to
prepare herself for their inevitable confrontation, she squared her
shoulders.
Good move, lady.
You’re going to need a dose of courage for I plan on giving you a verbal
thrashing you’ll never forget.
He extended his
hand, the offending dart lying in his palm. “I believe you lost this…in my
neck.”
“Crap, yes, I
did.” She plucked it from his hand. “I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to hit
you.”
He placed his
hands on his hips and glared into her blue eyes. “Really? Then who the hell were
you aiming for?”
The woman had
the audacity to giggle. “I…I wasn’t aiming for anyone. You see, Carrie Jo”–she
jerked her thumb toward the table of women behind her–“bumped against my elbow
just as I was shooting. She was horsing around, calling me ‘Dart
Demon.’”
His gaze
ricocheted toward the gaggle of women, all nodding and smiling. Two did a finger
wave. He scowled as a dull ache settled behind his eyeballs. When Dart Demon
leaned toward him, he got a whiff of her perfume and fought to ignore its
beguiling, flowery scent.
“Just between
us,” she began, her voice lowered to a conspiratorial whisper, “she’s had too
much to drink. Good thing I’m the designated driver tonight.” Her hand rose in a
swearing gesture. “Honest. Nothing stronger than diet soda. See, Carrie Jo and
her boyfriend are fighting again. They’re just not suited for each other.” Her
blonde head shook once. “Ever notice how opposites
attract? It’s the strangest thing, isn’t it?”
She pursed her
lips, giving him no time to reply before she charged ahead like his prize
Brahman bull. Evidently the woman didn’t need to breathe to talk.
“He likes rap
music and she likes country. He likes to play video games while she runs
marathons and works out. He’s a slob and she’s a neat freak. Yet, they can’t
keep their hands off each other. The chemistry’s there, but not the
compatibility. Know what I mean?”
Tyler inhaled
and opened his mouth, ready to start his tirade. But before one angry word could
roll off his tongue, she commenced her nonsensical rambling again.
“That’s not why
we’re here though. We’re here to celebrate. I sold an article to a magazine. My
first!” A smile, brighter than a hill country sunrise spread and niggled at one
of his faint, long-forgotten
memories.
“Isn’t that just
too wild?” She pressed a hand to full breasts that strained a T-shirt imprinted
with: I’m the strong, silent type.
Silent? Are you
freakin’ kidding me?
“People keep
telling me I have writing talent, but I’m not so sure. I guess you could say I
have a lot of self-doubt.” Her blue-eyed gaze locked on his as she pursed those
pink lips again. “I’m just not good with words, you know?”
Right, and I’m
not good with raising cattle. The dull ache
in his head ratcheted up a notch.
“I’m prattling,
aren’t I? I am.” Those blonde curls bobbed again, and he wondered if they were
as soft as they looked. “I prattle when
I get nervous. Normally I’m quiet.” Nervous hands rose and fell. “Most days you
can’t get a word out of me.”
Just my damn
lucky day then, isn’t it?
She waved her
hand as if to dismiss her concerns. “Silly me, you don’t want to hear my life’s
story. You’re here to chew me out for hitting you in the neck with the dart,
aren’t you? And you have every right to. Is darts a sport? Or a pastime? I’m not
athletic, you know. Never was, except for riding horses.” Her lips pursed while
her forehead wrinkled. “No matter, I suppose. Does it hurt? Let me see.” She
leaned up on her cowgirl boots. “Show me where it hit.”
Woman, for the
love of heaven, shut up. He merely
pointed. By now his head throbbed more than the wound.
Warm breath
feathered across his neck. Fingertips ran over his skin, and he felt current zap
clear to his calloused feet.
“Honestly, you
can barely see it. Might want to rub a little antibiotic cream on it before you
go to bed tonight, though. That’s what I do when I get a paper cut, or slice my
finger cutting veggies. Should be okay in a day or two. A little iodine wouldn’t
hurt, but then not everyone likes iodine.”
God, the woman’s
like a verbal buzz saw. Pain pounded the
backside of his eyeballs, and he pinched the bridge of his nose between his
thumb and index finger.
“Let me buy you
a beer. The least I can do is compensate you in some way. Like I said, it was an
accident.” She
pursed her full, pink lips again—a bad sign. “Funny thing about
accidents…”
To shut her up
and bring some relief to his headache, Tyler did the one thing he knew would
stop her incessant
chatter.
He kissed
her.
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4 comments:
Hi Vonnie!
The book sounds great! Good luck sweetie in it's future! Can't wait to see what you have next!
Thanks so much, Sarah. And good luck to you, too. Keep writing your awesome stories!
Love the excerpt. Can't wait to read it. I could totally see the whole thing in my head.
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