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Sunday, March 17, 2013

Sneak Peek Sunday by Vonnie Davis



SIX PARAGRAPHS FROM RAIN IS A LOVE SONG

French counterterrorism agent Jean-Luc is working undercover as Marcus Blackstone. He's just showered and is wearing nothing but water drops and a towel.
Room Service Scene...

“This is Marcus Blackstone in room three-oh-nine. I ordered condoms, but you didn’t deliver enough. I need more than what you left in my room.” He ran a hand over his hard chest. “How many?” His gaze swept to Gwen. “At least three times as many as you just brought.” He stopped talking and watched her. “Make that four times as many.”

“This is maple flavoring, I think.” Swirling her tongue across the top of the pastry to capture more of the sweet chocolate, Gwen moaned. “This is the richest chocolate I think I’ve ever eaten.” Jean-Luc’s attention was locked onto her mouth.

His eyes narrowed and the towel wiggled. “Send me five. Five times as many.” His voice cracked like a pubescent boy.

She untied the belt to her robe and ran a hand over her bare skin. When a dollop of cream accidently dripped onto her breast, he groaned. The towel tented.
 
Men. They really were so easy.

“Gwen, so help me God.” He turned and yelled into the phone, “Bring them all. You heard me. Every freakin’ condom you’ve got. Hurry, damn it!”
 
 

20 comments:

Sara Walter Ellwood said...

LOL!! That was hilarious!

Delynn Royer said...

"Bring them all!" So funny. Great peek! :)

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Thanks, Sara, I had so much fun with this hero. He allowed me tho use my humor on him.

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Thanks, Delynn, Gwen knows how to push this man's buttons.

AJ Nuest said...

LOLOL! One of my favorite scenes, darlin! Whoot! Showcases your amazing ability to write humor with passion!

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Thanks, AJ. I love pushing me to the edge--in real life and in my books--don't you?

Dixie Lee Brown said...

Lol!! That was amazing, Vonnie. I can just see poor Jean-Luc sweating and prayin' for condoms! Great teaser!

Willa Blair said...

LOL! How funny. Great job, Vonnie! I love the line: "Men. They really were so easy."

Nancy Jardine said...

Vonnie! I'm blushing...and maybe drooling as well. :-) Lovely...ice cream ...no,I mean excerpt. :-)

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Poor Jean-Luc. He's a control freak, unfortunately Gwen is a bigger control freak than he is. Writing their story was a lot of fun. I'm halfway through your ALL OR NOTHING. Super read. Super!!!!

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Willa, I allowed more of my humor to show in this book than in previous stories. I'm glad you liked it. Thrilled, actually.

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Thanks, Nancy. A little blushing never hurt anyone. Glad you enjoyed it.

Angela Adams said...

ooh,la-la! That scene was so funny.

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Thanks, Angela. I was going for the visual. The teasing gleam in Gwen's eye and the tension in Jean-Luc's expression.

Sandra Dailey said...

OMG, Vonnie, that scene was classic! I loved the build up.

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Thanks so much Sandra.

Jan Moran said...

Nice blog! I found your great blog through the WLC Blog Follows on the World Literary Cafe! Great to connect!

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

So nice to connect with you, too, Jan. I'll be visiting soon!

Angel Nicholas said...

LOL!! Poor Jean Luc! Funny, yet steamy. I'm so looking forward to reading your books. A single download stands between Jean Luc and I. You don't mind if I have a wee bit of a crush on him, right??

Vonnie Davis ~ Romance Author said...

Not at all, Angel. I crushed on him as I wrote his story.