SIX PARAGRAPHS FROM RAIN IS A LOVE SONG
French counterterrorism agent Jean-Luc is working undercover as Marcus Blackstone. He's just showered and is wearing nothing but water drops and a towel.
Room Service Scene...
“This is Marcus Blackstone in room
three-oh-nine. I ordered condoms, but you didn’t deliver enough. I need more
than what you left in my room.” He ran a hand over his hard chest. “How many?”
His gaze swept to Gwen. “At least three times as many as you just brought.” He stopped talking and watched her. “Make that four times as many.”
“This is maple flavoring, I think.” Swirling
her tongue across the top of the pastry to capture more of the sweet chocolate,
Gwen moaned. “This is the richest chocolate I think I’ve ever eaten.” Jean-Luc’s
attention was locked onto her mouth.
His eyes narrowed and the towel wiggled.
“Send me five. Five times as many.” His voice cracked like a pubescent boy.
She untied the belt to her robe and
ran a hand over her bare skin. When a dollop of cream accidently dripped onto her
breast, he groaned. The towel tented.
Men. They really were so easy.
“Gwen, so help me God.” He turned
and yelled into the phone, “Bring them all. You heard me. Every freakin’ condom
you’ve got. Hurry, damn it!”
20 comments:
LOL!! That was hilarious!
"Bring them all!" So funny. Great peek! :)
Thanks, Sara, I had so much fun with this hero. He allowed me tho use my humor on him.
Thanks, Delynn, Gwen knows how to push this man's buttons.
LOLOL! One of my favorite scenes, darlin! Whoot! Showcases your amazing ability to write humor with passion!
Thanks, AJ. I love pushing me to the edge--in real life and in my books--don't you?
Lol!! That was amazing, Vonnie. I can just see poor Jean-Luc sweating and prayin' for condoms! Great teaser!
LOL! How funny. Great job, Vonnie! I love the line: "Men. They really were so easy."
Vonnie! I'm blushing...and maybe drooling as well. :-) Lovely...ice cream ...no,I mean excerpt. :-)
Poor Jean-Luc. He's a control freak, unfortunately Gwen is a bigger control freak than he is. Writing their story was a lot of fun. I'm halfway through your ALL OR NOTHING. Super read. Super!!!!
Willa, I allowed more of my humor to show in this book than in previous stories. I'm glad you liked it. Thrilled, actually.
Thanks, Nancy. A little blushing never hurt anyone. Glad you enjoyed it.
ooh,la-la! That scene was so funny.
Thanks, Angela. I was going for the visual. The teasing gleam in Gwen's eye and the tension in Jean-Luc's expression.
OMG, Vonnie, that scene was classic! I loved the build up.
Thanks so much Sandra.
Nice blog! I found your great blog through the WLC Blog Follows on the World Literary Cafe! Great to connect!
So nice to connect with you, too, Jan. I'll be visiting soon!
LOL!! Poor Jean Luc! Funny, yet steamy. I'm so looking forward to reading your books. A single download stands between Jean Luc and I. You don't mind if I have a wee bit of a crush on him, right??
Not at all, Angel. I crushed on him as I wrote his story.
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