Someone swaggered out of the moonlit night toward Rachel. Exhausted from a long day of driving, she braked and blinked. Either she was hallucinating or her sugar levels had plummeted. Maybe that accounted for the male mirage, albeit a very magnificent male mirage, trekking toward her. She peered once more into the hot July night at the image illuminated by her headlights. Sure enough, there he was, cresting the hill on foot—a naked man wearing nothing but a black cowboy hat, a pair of boots and a go-to-hell sneer.
Sunday, September 4, 2011
SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY --
Someone swaggered out of the moonlit night toward Rachel. Exhausted from a long day of driving, she braked and blinked. Either she was hallucinating or her sugar levels had plummeted. Maybe that accounted for the male mirage, albeit a very magnificent male mirage, trekking toward her. She peered once more into the hot July night at the image illuminated by her headlights. Sure enough, there he was, cresting the hill on foot—a naked man wearing nothing but a black cowboy hat, a pair of boots and a go-to-hell sneer.
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Vonnie, you're doing Six Sentence Sunday! I love sss. Also love this six! Too good!
Great! Awesome last line!
The last line alone would make me buy the book! You know, just to see why he was sneering.
Love yours! May I share one?
Thinking she’d like to sneak away and postpone the meeting, D'Anne put her foot out the door just in time to see a tall cowboy walking her way. He wore a brown Stetson propped on top of his head, tight faded jeans, and scuffed boots.
One word popped into her head. Big.
How would he fit? The RV was forty feet long
and had slide-out extensions for added living space, but the man was huge.
I missed something somewhere.....WHAT is the title to this sss excerpt???? Gotta have it!
hugs, Kari Thomas, www.authorkari.com
How intriguing!! Sure makes me want to read more.
Love this! Can't wait to read the book!
All the Six Sentence Sunday excerpts at this time are from STORM'S INTERLUDE. Sorry I didn't make that clear. It's available at The Wild Rose Press and on Amazon, too.
Forgive me, Vonnie. My faux pas.
Lynne
Lynne, I wasn't referring to you. I was thrilled you felt comfortable enough here at Vintage Vonnie to share. And I loved it!!! I was answering Kari's question above where she stated she missed the title of the book. Believe me, NO faux pas on your part. Hugs.
Rachel, you lucky lady! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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